Two-Page Spread Feedback and Revisions
Since the two-page spread was made, it is time to receive peer feedback, then revise the spread based on the feedback. Below is how the spread was prior to any edits. Revision #1 The first peer recommendation was to increase the size of the font. Before even attempting to implement this, it was obvious that this would not work. Firstly, the font would be too large not all fit on the page, which means that some of the text would have to be completely removed, thus making the quality of the article worse. Revision #2 The next recommendation was to add a byline. At first, this did not seem like a useful change, but when it was put into the spread, it appeared much more professional as well as following the conventions of tech magazines, as many tech magazine articles include bylines. This edit was made by simply decreasing the size of the title by two points, then inserting the byline on the bottom right of it in Roboto Condensed, just like the body text, but bold. Revision #3 Anoth...